iOS 배포에서 거부된 경우 대응
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review의 내용을 보고 답장의 내용을 생각한다.
이것은 직접 링크이지만 itunesconnect에 액세스하면 눈에 띄는 표시가 나오므로 itunesconnect를 보면 review의 내용에 도착할 수 있습니다.
검토 내용 확인
지적 내용은 기본적으로 Apple 가이드라인 에 따른 것이 됩니다.
그래서 가이드라인과 함께 보면 보다 이해할 수 있다.
이하 지적 이유만 발췌.
Guideline 2.1 - Information Needed
We were unable to sign in to review your app with the demo account information you provided.
In order for us to review your app, please provide us with a functional demo account
so that we may fully assess your app's features.
Guideline 5.1.1 - Legal - Privacy - Data Collection and Storage
We noticed that your app requires users to register with personal information that is not directly relevant to your app’s core functionality.
Specifically, the following fields are required but do not appear to be directly relevant to your app’s core functionality:
Date of birth
Guideline 2.1 - Information Needed
이것은 로그인할 수 없기 때문에 로그인 정보 갱신해 줘라고 말하고 있다.
캡처도 붙어 있었기 때문에 보면, 메일 주소 인증용의 demo 어카운트를 제공하고 있었지만, GoogleLogin 하고 있었기 때문에 그것이 원인.
Guideline 5.1.1 - Legal - Privacy - Data Collection and Storage
이것은 개인정보는 필요한 정보 이외에 취하지 말아라, 라고 말하고 있다. 지적의 대상이 되고 있는 것은 「Date of birth」(생년월일).
app's core functionality(앱의 핵심 기능)에 사용하지 않으면 옵션으로 해보고 싶은 것을 말하고 있으므로, "Date of birth"(생년월일)는 app's core functionality라고 생각하고 있다고 주장한다.
2. 회신
google 번역만으로도 최악 전해진다(가).
일본어가 중복이라면, 주장이 전해지지 않는 위험성이 있으므로, 가능한 한 짧은 문장으로 하는 것을 추천한다.
> We were unable to sign in to review your app with the demo account information you provided. In order for us to review your app, please provide us with a functional demo account so that we may fully assess your app's features.
I know your review.
You should click "Login by mail address".
This account can login by "Login by mail address" but can't login by "Login by google".
It's because this is demo account.
> We noticed that your app requires users to register with personal information that is not directly relevant to your app’s core functionality. Specifically, the following fields are required but do not appear to be directly relevant to your app’s core functionality:
> Date of birth
We believe birthdays is the core function of the application.
Regarding “birth date”, I explained you earlier and received your consent to get this information from the users.
In enjoying sports together, due to physical fitness or technical reasons, events owners have established age requirements in the conditions.
So we think this is important that the user can be found sports events suitable for himself as soon as possible and the users can realize a more satisfying sports experience.
For that reason, we think that registration of birthdays is essential for our application.
So we think this app is in line with the Apple guidelines.
저쪽에서 대답을 기다리다
이번에는 1발 OK. 대체로 하루 이내에 돌아온다.
Hello,
Thank you for providing this information.
We will continue the review, and we will notify you if there are any further issues.
Best regards,
App Store Review
요약
이것은 직접 링크이지만 itunesconnect에 액세스하면 눈에 띄는 표시가 나오므로 itunesconnect를 보면 review의 내용에 도착할 수 있습니다.
검토 내용 확인
지적 내용은 기본적으로 Apple 가이드라인 에 따른 것이 됩니다.
그래서 가이드라인과 함께 보면 보다 이해할 수 있다.
이하 지적 이유만 발췌.
Guideline 2.1 - Information Needed
We were unable to sign in to review your app with the demo account information you provided.
In order for us to review your app, please provide us with a functional demo account
so that we may fully assess your app's features.
Guideline 5.1.1 - Legal - Privacy - Data Collection and Storage
We noticed that your app requires users to register with personal information that is not directly relevant to your app’s core functionality.
Specifically, the following fields are required but do not appear to be directly relevant to your app’s core functionality:
Date of birth
Guideline 2.1 - Information Needed
이것은 로그인할 수 없기 때문에 로그인 정보 갱신해 줘라고 말하고 있다.
캡처도 붙어 있었기 때문에 보면, 메일 주소 인증용의 demo 어카운트를 제공하고 있었지만, GoogleLogin 하고 있었기 때문에 그것이 원인.
Guideline 5.1.1 - Legal - Privacy - Data Collection and Storage
이것은 개인정보는 필요한 정보 이외에 취하지 말아라, 라고 말하고 있다. 지적의 대상이 되고 있는 것은 「Date of birth」(생년월일).
app's core functionality(앱의 핵심 기능)에 사용하지 않으면 옵션으로 해보고 싶은 것을 말하고 있으므로, "Date of birth"(생년월일)는 app's core functionality라고 생각하고 있다고 주장한다.
2. 회신
google 번역만으로도 최악 전해진다(가).
일본어가 중복이라면, 주장이 전해지지 않는 위험성이 있으므로, 가능한 한 짧은 문장으로 하는 것을 추천한다.
> We were unable to sign in to review your app with the demo account information you provided. In order for us to review your app, please provide us with a functional demo account so that we may fully assess your app's features.
I know your review.
You should click "Login by mail address".
This account can login by "Login by mail address" but can't login by "Login by google".
It's because this is demo account.
> We noticed that your app requires users to register with personal information that is not directly relevant to your app’s core functionality. Specifically, the following fields are required but do not appear to be directly relevant to your app’s core functionality:
> Date of birth
We believe birthdays is the core function of the application.
Regarding “birth date”, I explained you earlier and received your consent to get this information from the users.
In enjoying sports together, due to physical fitness or technical reasons, events owners have established age requirements in the conditions.
So we think this is important that the user can be found sports events suitable for himself as soon as possible and the users can realize a more satisfying sports experience.
For that reason, we think that registration of birthdays is essential for our application.
So we think this app is in line with the Apple guidelines.
저쪽에서 대답을 기다리다
이번에는 1발 OK. 대체로 하루 이내에 돌아온다.
Hello,
Thank you for providing this information.
We will continue the review, and we will notify you if there are any further issues.
Best regards,
App Store Review
요약
Guideline 2.1 - Information Needed
We were unable to sign in to review your app with the demo account information you provided.
In order for us to review your app, please provide us with a functional demo account
so that we may fully assess your app's features.
Guideline 5.1.1 - Legal - Privacy - Data Collection and Storage
We noticed that your app requires users to register with personal information that is not directly relevant to your app’s core functionality.
Specifically, the following fields are required but do not appear to be directly relevant to your app’s core functionality:
Date of birth
google 번역만으로도 최악 전해진다(가).
일본어가 중복이라면, 주장이 전해지지 않는 위험성이 있으므로, 가능한 한 짧은 문장으로 하는 것을 추천한다.
> We were unable to sign in to review your app with the demo account information you provided. In order for us to review your app, please provide us with a functional demo account so that we may fully assess your app's features.
I know your review.
You should click "Login by mail address".
This account can login by "Login by mail address" but can't login by "Login by google".
It's because this is demo account.
> We noticed that your app requires users to register with personal information that is not directly relevant to your app’s core functionality. Specifically, the following fields are required but do not appear to be directly relevant to your app’s core functionality:
> Date of birth
We believe birthdays is the core function of the application.
Regarding “birth date”, I explained you earlier and received your consent to get this information from the users.
In enjoying sports together, due to physical fitness or technical reasons, events owners have established age requirements in the conditions.
So we think this is important that the user can be found sports events suitable for himself as soon as possible and the users can realize a more satisfying sports experience.
For that reason, we think that registration of birthdays is essential for our application.
So we think this app is in line with the Apple guidelines.
저쪽에서 대답을 기다리다
이번에는 1발 OK. 대체로 하루 이내에 돌아온다.
Hello,
Thank you for providing this information.
We will continue the review, and we will notify you if there are any further issues.
Best regards,
App Store Review
요약
Hello,
Thank you for providing this information.
We will continue the review, and we will notify you if there are any further issues.
Best regards,
App Store Review
영어를 걸지 않아도 일본어의 주장과 Google 번역만 있으면 어떻게 된다.
당연하지만, 이유 확인에 대한 주장이 중요.
Reference
이 문제에 관하여(iOS 배포에서 거부된 경우 대응), 우리는 이곳에서 더 많은 자료를 발견하고 링크를 클릭하여 보았다 https://qiita.com/entaku0818/items/a2dbd57a936836403fd2텍스트를 자유롭게 공유하거나 복사할 수 있습니다.하지만 이 문서의 URL은 참조 URL로 남겨 두십시오.
우수한 개발자 콘텐츠 발견에 전념 (Collection and Share based on the CC Protocol.)